there’s an extra comma in panel 2. It would flow better as “After the most recent payroll cuts, getting anything done means waiting on the customers as efficiently as possible”
that comma between done and means makes no sense
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RETAIL: Year One
This is currently the only collected volume of Retail comics. It contains every comic (printed in black and white) from 2006.
there’s an extra comma in panel 2. It would flow better as “After the most recent payroll cuts, getting anything done means waiting on the customers as efficiently as possible”
that comma between done and means makes no sense